Jury comments were mostly about the issues that I am also trying to solve.One comment was that i’m creating a theme focuses on experiences about cinema and artificial reality; but there is a weak relation between these parts. theme should be more holistic and the relations should be read better. Also jury asked to clarify the main functioning: entrance, toilets, etc.
The issue that is challenging for me is how the places that i think of; which comprehends the island through cinema, provides an environment for individual or public experiences get in contact with playground, market and restaurant ( places in lunapark’s current data). So, now i am working on how i can include playground to the theme. (cinema-lunapark-playground relation). Also a jury member stated that the lost ‘kır gazinosu’ culture can be returned. But, i don’t think the theme can contain this culture because sense of fun with gazing is very different from the fun with cinema theme.